Wow, this is wonderful. Very good use of free verse.
"(only this time
it is literal because there are only so many
figures of speech a girl can take before
she loses all sense of poetic irony); "
Those lines were really great; really pulled me in. Its like a burst of creative energy. Its inspiring.
I'm not sure if I got it completely(.") but I'm don't think it really matters. I still liked it.
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-

:D love it.