well that's beautiful. Can't say I understand it, it's like reading shakespear, I get a few lines but not all.. you must get AIM, please. I miss being able to talk to you when at my dad's house. love ya bundles babe.
~Mel

You have a real way with words and imagery. For me, the first stanza, especially, contained some very forceful images. I really enjoy the positivity and determination carried in the words. Excellent work! ;)!

Sorry to say I didnt understand much of it. This is due to the fact I am sick, so sorry about this short review. (shouldnt have read it when I was sick...duh..) But hey you used the word azure! Awesome word there.
Take care and keep writing.
-Seras