Wow, you make me feel uneducated. When I read the whole "Infecting cacophony of emotions / Flagitious doves turned indefatiable" I was like...okay, wow...I wonder if he really speaks like this in real life? Did you read the whole dictionary or something? Anyways...again, with your imagery...I love imagery, but then again, there's a con to it...sometimes it's undecipherable. Like what did "Silver stars popping bubbles / Tears in alien-red rain" mean to you? I couldn't figure out what the true meaning of that was... Oh, and I positively loved the line "Lonliness follows anger lavishly". So true...

I like the poem, but the "you" should be explained better. It distances the reader from the main character.