HOW SWEET! *cries* i loved this!

Another great chapter.

awesome! I totally loved it! I wish i was like Jessenia. Unfortunately i have blond hair and blue eyes, but it's not that bad. Jessenia was mysterious and carefree, i love it when character/people are like that. It fascinates me, makes me somewhat jealous, but not in a bad way, a good way, like i always want to be near them. Good job, and i'm glad they're together now. Keep writing.
~Meghan

I love how it’s a first person account and the details u use. But it is a sad story considering the circumstance. *sighs * The obstacles love must face….can’t wait to read more

hey loser, what's up? Blah, it truly is annoying how people rate crap, instead of everything else that you really work on. I find it very annoying... gr... Anyways... "even your blood. Perhaps that most of all." ah... sounds like vampires... hehehe... So, when's he going to dump the china girl and go out with the caramel? haha, you should add a fight between the two chicks, it would be funny... lol, ok, I'll stop rambling now... ta ta for now

o... wishful thinking... I hope there's a description of him later and that he's hot... I'm only on ch. 2 :) but i haven't read any of your stuff in awhile... hehe... hey, better not let Anqi get ahold of this if you're checking for grammar mistakes and stuff like that... the last time i let her check one of my essays she practically rewrote the hole thing! lol, but you no i love her! ~not in a sexy way~ well... ta ta for now!

Another fabulous chapter. Characteriszation is great, and they are both so unique and true to themselves. Great work!
xoxo

This is a great story. Update it soon.

New chapter up now and I hope you guys liked that one, it's obviously written in Lucas's point of view, since he was getting a bad rep (though he deserves it :) ) so i decided to let you guys see a little of him. any suggestions or improvements that could be made, let me know. thanks and please check out satana too, i know its a lil hard to read, but i would really love the feedback. bye bye.
hunny
thanks for all who reviewed and like it so far

This is really interesting and I'm already hooked. Hury up and update:P

I really like this story. Write more soon.

Aw, how sad! Poor Jessenia! I really, really like it so far, can't wait to read more.

Wonderful story :) This is completely different to anything I would normally read, but it was amazing. Very, very good :)

Amazing... simply amazing. Lucas is a coward. He's an idiot for choosing that porcelin doll over the exciting shadow. Sorry a bit poetic there for a sec. Keep writing. Also if you could find the time i'd really appreciate if you could take a look at my story. It's called Every Rose has it's Thorn. I'd really appreciate it. Thanks.
~!*Nemesis*!~

Yay! I really like this- the dialogue is great!! Am looking forward to more. Love Senia, and like how Lucas is developed...looking forward to more...
xoxo