this was really cool, very haunting, very dark, very...chilling. i especially liked the line "silencing my music" it was just so...i dont know, nightmarish for some reason.
the concept i thought was awesome, very original and therefore great to read. there were a few things in there which kinda hindered the flow of impact such as the second line "its be stilling my soul" i presume that its supposed to be "being" but im not sure. also in the second to last line you have a mistake which is very easy to make "force feed this honesty" fed instead of feed.
other than that, i really liked this, great work chica, kudos!

interesting... reminds me of MACbeth my eng. teacher said imagination was his downfall... i like it... alwho i kinda wish i knew waht the idea was