me likes, you portrey the sadness quite well in this, it is very unfortuante that so many jews had to die in the holocaust.

It is really sad what the Nazis did to the Jews. Nicely written. A good point.
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That's incredibly sad, but beautifully written. You conveyed the emotion in it excellently. Keep up the great work!
~Lsay312