I'm glad you decided to finish this poem and post it. Told ya it was good! ^_~
~WZB~

This was incredibly good, and extremely original. Congratulations on writing a fantastic poem. The form was wonderful as well, your poem rhymed but still made sense, and flowed really well.
Great job
~Beau Coeur~

WOW! This moved along so perfectly, the rhyming was incredible, and the meaning and emotion was even better! Wow, just keep writing!

First and foremost I do believe you are one of my favorite poetry authors on this site.
Choke on all the words you say
Stagnant aroma, burning skin
Rip myself away again
I love that part of the poem. Anyway
do keep writing.
T.I.B.O.