 Tink McGregor 2004-02-24 . chapter 1 Very good! *applause* |
 til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton 2004-02-20 . chapter 1powerful and deep. The rhyme and rhythm worked o so well. I'm envious of your talent. Your poetry just is so good, so emotional. . .
keep writing-
till-iburnout |
 imxnotxyourxstar 2004-02-19 . chapter 1I really liked this. The rhyming worked well and there was also a rhythm. Strong poem. Keep it up!
~Lsay312 |
 Infinite Smiles 2004-02-19 . chapter 1I love the title. I love the poem. Very creative. |
 Ravynne 2004-02-19 . chapter 1That's great writing. I'm adding it to my favorites. |