Cool poem. I like how you seem to juxtapose short, almost lyrical phrases with verses. I enjoyed reading it. Good work.

My goodness! That was powerful! I can't even think of words to describe how true this is! "Yea, Verily, and Forsooth!" "Amen, sister!" and all the above! How wonderous is our God, the Creator of all that is, all that was and all that will be! And He has given you a magnificent talent with words. Let His name be praised!