Wow, ditto what Impressionalist said. My thoughts exactly. Very well done, thanks for the good read.

with all due respect,Gothic Energy

When having others review poetry, it is a matter of seeing how well and how artisitically the reader believes that the poet developed the topic. Since I dont know what the topic is, exactly, Im not sure that I can do any more of a review than this. I'm sorry ;.;

Very nice! I haven't seen very many poems about swamps but I simply love this one! I especially like the lines "No consolation deserved /
And none received".

Beautiful.

now then. This is one of the poems that makes me happy this site is still alive. WELL done. the rotting lilies imagery just made it for me. Something of beauty has turned out grotesquely...m. perfect.

Wow...that was deep. I loved the poem. Beautifully written, the descriptions were wonderful. Keep up the good work!
~Lsay312