very nice. indeed nice. demonstrates that an idea does not need expansion to be complete... (something I rather have trouble with.) reminds me of the visual imagry in the Delirium story in Endless Nights. very good indeed.

thats an odd series of imagery [that's intended as an observation, rather than a complaint]
i was wondering whether the lack of capitalisation was intentional, since there's quite a few depth-adding qualities if it is intentional.
saying a lot in not a lot is something of a gift.
-guy.

Short and perfect. The imagery is wonderful.
* thank you for all of your reviews. the review of What Women Want, made me roll on the floor laughing.