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| The Harlequin Doll 2004-09-12 ch 1,   | That is so friggin weird!! Not your poem, but how I just went threw the same bloody thing with Kayley, one of my ex-best freinds. She hurt me..wow you put into words what I could not. My prais. Oh just a favor, please read and review some of my storys..i need to know what you ppl think, lol. Cry |
| daphnegray78 2004-04-16 ch 1, | What a jerk! Wow, I'm so sorry you had to go through that. I went through something similar about six months ago...it still hurts sometimes, but I'm mostly over it. Anyway, awesome poem. The emotions behind it are described wonderfully. Great work! P.S. I saw in your bio that you didn't care if about people adding you to MSN IM, so I added you. My screen name is Daphne Gray. Um, yeah. That's all I have to say. :o) Have fun! |
| Live2Create 2004-02-25 ch 1, | I like this. The rhyming scheme is really good. I guess this person wasnt' that good a friend...sorry about that! Mystery-Chick |
| Fairy Goddess Princess Gene... 2004-02-21 ch 1, | that was great. one of my friends does that to me. we are not friends anymore because of it. |
| Nenriel 2004-02-21 ch 1, | that guy must be seriously evil... don't know what else to say |
| DarkLoveGoddess54CryptKeepe... 2004-02-21 ch 1, | Very well written poem in my opinion. I can understand what your going though right now, it has happened to me before, and I can relate. Time heals all wounds, including emotional ones, but talking about it always makes it better. Im always here if you want to talk about it. |
| flying blind 2004-02-21 ch 1, | Hey, This is an amazingly well writen poem, you are very talented. I hope that you find away to over come the feelings you experience, i know that it wont be easy .. i can relate... thats a different story but again well done this is really good! =) |
| Mandas 2004-02-20 ch 1, | Hey fake french beast. I hope this helped get your feelings out. Talk to me whenever you need to. Mandas |
| Procyon Lotor 2004-02-20 ch 1, | I'm sorry; I frickin' wanna know how in hell you got inside my mind. Weird, I know EXACTLY, EXACTLY what that is. Nicely done, some errors you might want to fix (spelling and such) but otherwise, good work. -Monty |
| Peg Pannery 2004-02-20 ch 1, | I know that everyone says 'time heals all wounds' and that's because it's true. Your a great writer and I hope you keep writing! This poem was good because you could feel the pain in it. Anyway, ttyl! |
| Meg St. James 2004-02-20 ch 1, | Good poem. I was in a similar situation a few months ago. Me and my friend are just getting back on track but we've been friends for a while. I don't know if we'll ever be as close as we were but like you said... I'm no where near done with him. Cheer up. Things will work out in the end. They always do. (ok, usually being that optimistic makes me sick, but in this case, it didn't) ~Nemesis |