 Simply-Crazy 2006-04-19 . chapter 1Usually, I don't review. But your poem has compelled me to do so. Like Mystified said, one can't just read this and move on. It seriously requires some thought. Well done! |
 A Beautiful Nightmare 2006-04-10 . chapter 1Wow... this is really, really powerful... I like the theme... very pursuasive... I think there should be a comma between "stupid and liveless" in line 6... but other than that... well done! |
 Insanity Da Best Policy 2005-04-23 . chapter 1Wow! It really makes us wonder doesn't it! I seriously wanna join you. I loved this poem very, very, much so! Fabulous work!
Janet. |
 Mystified 2004-03-09 . chapter 1This is beautifully written and very thought-provoking. I am not a big fan of poetry, but I really like this. A person couldn't just read this and move on. They'd have to think about it.
Simply fabulous. I'm very impressed. |