R! I want to read more. I really despise Monica. She's a...a...well, I'll not say what she is. But still! I can't wait for an update. I hope it comes soon!

Sincerely,H.P. Farmer

I like this chapter also, it's sort of happy and sad at the same time. I need an update!

Ah! No! Yes! I mean...gah! So dramatic! Ep. I hate Monica. GR. Can't wait for more!

that was a very well written chapter... i loved it. also loved how she saw the picture at the end!

I like this chapter as well, it gives us a nice insight on Hannah's thoughts so that her feelings are perfectly clear. This is weird, I relate so much to this story that it sort of moves a part of me *tear. Excellent job, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Oh no, I feel her pain. This story is progressing now, and it's going somewhere. I definitely like the turn of events... On to the next chapter :)

o wow this is a great story! i feel bad for hannah.. evil evil monica.. well anyways good job and keep writing

Aww... so sad! I don't know what to say. I feel so bad for Hannah and I'm so angry with Monica and Grey... :-( Mack

you wrote that chapter very well... i feel so sorry for her!

OMG... I knew it! I'm so sad... Stupid Grey sucks... and I'm just really angry with him right now. As for Monica... I can't use any of the words I find applicable for her... However, I am glad that Ezra is a good friend and all... maybe she can use him to win Grey? Or maybe she'll try that and end up with Ezra. But I really want her and Grey to end up together, even though Grey is... just awful. :-) Mack

I so knew that was going to happen! omg! poor Hannah... Ezra seems really nice, though

still very good!
just so you know, you made a typo... you called Toby "Trey" hee hee

Interesting. I'm curious to see where this is going. I really like this story, so my tiny criticism is to not make it too repetitive, like try to change the atmosphere from school once in a while. New things are always cool in a story. Anyways, this is getting somewhere...

adorable... i loved it... i love their chemistry

so, now is Monica going to be a "problem"? oh, I can't wait to see! :)