hi I'm french and i like your poem!
it's lovely but there are problems in french translation
like = comme, so "vous allumez mes yeux comme aucun autre"
and I think your "you" is "tu" et non "vous"
Don't use the dictionary to write that, or you will do a lot of mistake!
but in deep it's good

Wow that was cool. I'm learning how to speak french *shutters*... WOW, I never knew my french was so bad. I only read the first two lines of your poem in French and then I had to scroll down and read the translation ^_^. I feel sorry for the peeps that I read and reviewed in French. I thought it might be cool, but, it just didn't turn out right. Cool poem. Props on your French ^_^ Thanks SO much for adding a translation! Lol!