 BlAcKRoSes862000 2005-01-07 . chapter 9Yay! Update again now! I love this fic... it's just so good! |
 what-climbed-up-ur-arse 2005-01-06 . chapter 9nice chapter..plz continue.. update soon.. ciao |
 BlAcKRoSes862000 2005-01-05 . chapter 8I love this fic! You should update really really soon because I really wanna know the story behind Blade... |
 dude 2004-12-23 . chapter 8 i love it. love the romance, love the witches and deamon part of it. i especially like Blade. He reminds me of someone... please update soon |
 what-climbed-up-ur-arse 2004-12-22 . chapter 8i love the story.. plz continue it and update soon.. keep up the good work!ciao |
 Klanfer 2004-12-22 . chapter 8Darn.. i just wrote a review.. and pushed the sign in button.. arghI really like this story! It's very good.I can't think of any constructive comments.. *four a.m*I like the characters...xoxoxta'z luvvi |
 Ayashi-san 2004-06-22 . chapter 6Well, i liked your take on Wicca. The story is interesting but i find it alittle dragged out. In the 6th chapter i was so hoping to find out something interesting about Blade but it ended up turning into talk! It's still very good, dialogue is good and it really helps know the characters better. I hope you update soon! I'm mostly into sci-fi/fantasy/supernatural myself, kinda like you! Obessed with what i can't have! Anyway's other then that there are a few grammatical errors, like missing words or words that should be know but are -now- little things that mr.word can't pick up! Keep writting and i'll be back to read! *places you on her favorite authors list to prove it*... |
 Alcaeus of Cronus 2004-04-01 . chapter 1Very captivating! So far, I've only read the first chapter, but I'm hooked. I love the description of the house. Gotta love that mid-western comfort! All the down home pleasantries without all the farms and sweet tea. ^_^ Though, I couldn't live in a house like that. Too much color for me.
I can relate to Torri. I've been sort of antisocial my whole life. But, to write of vampires, you must be one. :)=
My only concern, use more similes and metaphores. And watch the double negatives. Keep it up! Good stuff! I'll be reading it every day! |
 pewpewpera fah wef 2004-03-28 . chapter 6Hmm, they aren't very nice to each other, are they? Nice little surprise visit. Update soon.
happy hunting
~Midnight Predator~ |
 silver_punk 2004-03-27 . chapter 6 What happened to the dinner date with her parents? other than that the story is good! |
 Lady Sari 2004-03-24 . chapter 5 too lazy to log in...
lovely 5th chapter. rox my sox. hahaha. i am HYPER. :)- and bored. not a good combo for me. :)
keep writing missy! hahah, see you in MATH! hahahahahahahahahaha. |
 icelandria 2004-03-22 . chapter 5 Hey girly! Goin' good. Need Evil! Want Evil! Crave Evil. Y didnt Torri react to Blade saying he loved her?? Nice so far. Peace love and hopefully cheesecake!!
~Jotter |
 Bradkrit 2004-03-18 . chapter 5 I am a man of few words |
 Midnight Predator, too lazy to log in 2004-03-14 . chapter 5 Ahh, it's a weekend, I'm much too lazy to log in. Yes, I'd say there was a lot of language in there. And a cliff hanger... Gah, I hate cliffhangers... Hmm, I still want to know what the deal is with the no soul. Ah, well, write more soon, I have to see who this intruder is.
happy hunting,
~Midnight Predator~ |
 icelandria 2004-03-11 . chapter 4 Pretty good mezaimie! Don't take the relationship to far to fast though, and where is the yang? the evil? the catastrophy? demons? warlocks? ...meep!!
Lov it! Mo-a
~ice |