Katie, You are an amazing writer. You are just SO amazing. This poem really (and i mean really) made me cry. I can't imagine what you could have been going through, and I'm proud of you for being so amazingly strong. You're the best.

I really liked it, but why did you break down in Health class?

very well done with the feelings of having your heart squeezed, the agony of losing a person. is this a true story? did you lose someone recently? well, i lament for you, there.
the only spelling mistake i saw was classrom. Classroom, you meant(of course, very simple).
i will try to post another poem for you soon. i'm thinking that, maybe in a monthor two, i'll have a go at getting myy poetry published. :P though, i dunno if they'll like angsty stuff. oh well. tough luck for .
keep up the good work!
-Rachel Morgan.
*Every legend leaves a mark*

It was very good. I felt so sorry for you when i read this. Its GREAT!

Why were you crying in health? I'm just curious. Otherwise, I really liked it.

wow..
wow...
this is so nice, I dont really know what to say..
I really hope this didnt happend to u.. doesnt sound to nice...
nice work)

I hate breaking down in public... Good write! Me likes.
Lil Lalita