 caks 2004-03-01 . chapter 1umm... death?? i dunno i'm bad at these things
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great poem and great descriptions, though! it really helps the reader to see whats going on! |
 Rosemary Greene 2004-02-28 . chapter 1I think I understand The narrator killed a person by means of a knife or a gun not really sure and the narrator only did it out of fear and self defense the snow was falling at the time and everyone else around the narrator feared her and this acts as a poem of forgiviness... Or that's what my mind says... I might be wrong...
Anyway really good poem I liked it a lot
Raven Demon |
 WarriorHeart 2004-02-21 . chapter 1This was completely brilliant. I loved the words; great job! |
 Ente 2004-02-21 . chapter 1wow! you have amazing word usage! whats happening in the vision...until the last stanza i thought maybe it was saying something about someone dying after being hit by lightning. no? i have no idea anymore though hang on im going to read it again...i dont konw. THE STUPID LAST STANZA! sorry, it really is a good poem im just frustruated...help! this is going to bug me forever! will you tell me what it's really about? really loved this one! keep writing! |