when did Lauren die?!?! i thought she was only attacked ... oh well. poor lauren - see, it makes me sad cuz MY name's lauren. well anyways, good story! ^.^

that's nice.. it's sad that mei died.. i suppose u ran out things for her... XD

this is so good,I love it !^^

I LOVE YOUR STORIES!
signed by your #1 fan
=^^=
Akira (aka Bishop Sasari)
Oh yeah I know I told you already about my pocky/cookie induced dream of this story and uh... write more in Valyti's! Or umm... I wont give you the picture of Super Yamato!!
Uh yeah... =^^=

amazing!

nice.. i think it's going to have a nice ending after all.. ^^

cake?? wat cake??

Very well-written story so far. You seem to be cranking out chapter after chapter wtih amazing speed. And it's really, really good! Poor Salyti, hope he gets out of this soon. *smacks him for doubting himself, then hugs* Please update again soon!

wah... so much is happening.. it's getting a little confusing now..

... omg! what happens next?

Waah! Salyti! *glomps him* Wai, a story based on HIS pov! Thank you so much, Maiden of the Stars!
I can't believe you haven't gotten many reviews yet, this deserves so many, just like the others did. I enjoyed reading this from another person's point of view, and I like how it's different for each story you write. For example, your stories about Taylor and his childhood friend. And now Salyti!
Please write more soon, if you can, I really want to know what'll happen next! Until then...