O.O...
1st stanza: The attitude Nagi has in my fic series including "Prologue to a Boy's Story."
2nd stanza: An insane Nagi's parting words to an already-gone Schuldich in my fic "Insanity in Blood." (though it implies a girl haha! Hey, he enjoys that, too! XDD)
3rd stanza: Sad, sad Nagi in my poem, "Cover My Eyes and Whisper, My Soul." Also of pretty, pretty Hibiki Kanau from GHOST (aka EERIE QUEERIE).
...okay, wasn't supposed to go that far into the anime/manga world...^^;
*baps self* It's a review, not a see-which-fic-each-stanza-is-related-to document! X_xU
LOVE IT MUCH! *huggles the angstiness*
~ Kit ~

i especially liked the powerful image you painted w/ your language:
Locked inside his battered eyes
Eyes that see to just despise
good job!

-excuse my angsty loving side taking over this review- I found this poem incredibly sensual.(Ehh, I don't know why myself) Nothing is sexier than rain, except crying in it. ^^
-Cindy Moon *)

Kind of short.. but its still good. I dont know the exact words to describe this poem.. but is very good... nice job
Tokiko

Its amazing how the rain can bring out your emotions. To walk in the rain by yourself is to walk as though your inermost thoughts, your wildest dreams, your secret desires, as though all these things walked beside you. To speak with yourself in the rain is to speak with them and to learn from them. Let the rain embrace you and bring you peace.
~Green Yoshi~

Oh My Gosh. That was so amzingly great. That is such a deep and emotional poem. Dear lord I can feel the pain. I think I want to cry.
Great job, just awesome job.
~Lady Lunara~