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| bfmusashi 2004-09-18 ch 1,   | hey. this was a very wonderful piece...very lyrical and delicate in its prose and i especially like the part near the end where you're talking about the hands of the mother, father, and grandmother, and offering a contrast between the three. very nicely done. :) btw thanks for all of your kind reviews, it really means a lot to me. |