I love dark writing! Bwa ha ha! It's so wonderous and horrid... hehe. Keep writing! I love reading into the drak thoughts of others... bwa ha ha!

I like the way your poem is and the creativity you put into this poem
ALSO I GOT ANOTHER POEM POSTED

good as always me like your poems loads

excellent peice here nothing i would change the vibe of this poem is deeply filled with emotion Keep Writing:)

hmm. it's very interesting. though there's a beautifully dark feel to the piece, i really don't feel it going anywhere. I'm looking for a clincher, a subject, or something like that. Instead it's completely random which is good...but not always. Do you have a theme in your mind when you write? If so, incorperate it into your pieces. It'll work wonders, I promise.
other than that though, I thoroughly enjoyed it. You have an almost light way of writing, even about such darkness, which is needed to maintain focus. well done.

i like this one very strong

Most excellent. I quiet agree and endure. Darkness is art of who we all are and the sooner we recognize that the sooner we shall begin to recognize and see ourselves. Keep it up.

Wonderful work... and excellent grammar...

sorry i havent reviewed in forever, been extremely busy, anywayz, on to the poem, generally i like it, the wording of this made for an excellent flow but it was a bit hard to understand cause of it, but then again, i like that in poems, makes people stop and think..well, the ones that stop and really try to read the poem anywayz, but just thought i should mention it incase you didnt notice, also the use of we, forgot what person that is, but it always confuses me in that i never if it includes the reader or its talking to the reader, i dunno, just my opinion, really like the second stanza of this one, good ideas and concept, muchly enjoyed this, nicely done

this was a nice poem...it was cool...just a nice poem...

Very good and remarkably descriptive...I cannot offer you much advice except to say keep up the descriptive work.

Hmm.. sounds like a thunderstorm heh...-
Nice word choice again.
Whispers In SIlence

Very good. I like it.

I really like this poem... I enjoyed how it all flows... btw thanks for reviewing my poem... i really appreciate it..

Wow, angst that doesn't involve two young anime boys, well done. lolol And (need I say it?) your amazing talent with the english language has manifested itself once more. Keep up the great work!
The One and Only