um...idk what to say, at all, whatsoever...first, i thought everything was so wrong and twisted...you know with the cheating on david's part, but then again, it was kinda beautiful...i feel really bad for terry and the baby...terry's gone and the baby will never know her mother...it's too bad jesse fell in love with a married guy...good story though!!

oh my god the mother dying almost mademe cry.good story. have to go beforemy sis kicks me off the internet .

hey gurl...that was a very good stories...so loving it...

Wow... wonderful story. The part of her finding out he had a wife and she was pregnant reminded me of a relative. She had a husband who had a lover outside of his home, and when the lover found out, instead of feeling betrayed and ending the relationship, she tried to make the wife divorced the husband, and tried to make the husband marry her. She ended up pregnant too. =T Well great story!

omgosh that was soo good!! please tell me that your planning to write an epilogue. oh i would just love to read an epilogue maybe 5 years later. haha. well i hope you do write one!

--xjessey

I really enjoyed reading this story. I thought this was a good ending. Good work

cute storry :) it went kinda fast but THATS THE WAY I LIKE it :) you stuck to the topic and stuff and yeahh i read it all in a hour :) hehe thankz bye keep up the good work!!

Aw, that was cute!

please please update this story! i need to know what happens next!

You know, all your stories are stopped with really bad cliffhangers, and it's been some time since you've updated. lol!
Anyways, this story is good. Somehow, it seems a bit rushed, but overall, it's good. =) So, who was that old lady? Was that Terry's ghost or something? (I don't believe in ghosts but it's just a guess. I mean anything can happen in a story, right?)
Anyways, update soon, ok? And don't leave such cruel cliffhangers! ;)

very good keep on updating please
and just to let you know you speeled that as "tat"

Good Chapter! Update SOON!!

Great Chapter! Update SOON!!

this is getting really good there were a couple spelling errors thought you might wnat to ix them for ex) rise, should be raise i believe. update soon

urm.. i'm a bit confused... isn't the killer dead?