Brutal.Intriguing.In all probability going to give me nightmares as I'm minutes from bed.A job well done.

I don't beleive in god, but I do beleive how can you appreciate the good if you don't experience the bad. Yeah, rape does so much damage. It just rips you of all hope and life. Nothing will ever get better. If you don't mind, can I write a male version, from a male's point of veiw who was raped? And ofcourse give you credit for inspiration? E-mail me or IM

If I were that girl, I would probably have done the same thing.
The part about them not being murdered...that they were executed for crimes against humanity...I love that, because it's true.
This is really graphic, but it's awesome.
~Pandista

I can feel the rage, and I like it. Lol.

i love this piece! i can see her sitting there telling someone this...the character is a strong one and the whole piece was very powerful! keep writing!

i'm...um...almost speechless. this was a very well written story. you can feel the anger seeping through the text. i was on edge the entire time.

^^ Very good. If you would be so kind as to continue... um... I'll give you a cookie ^.^

Very strong narrative, and enough repition to recognize a pattern and not have it simply be annoying lack of vocabulary type idea.
Aside from that, it is a very good peice in and of itself, theme wise. A couple of typos here and there but everyone does that sometimes...
Good job...:)

i'm speechless, and y'know i'm siding with the "**" on this one, and i'd have done the same thing she did. this is gold, this is ** gold. this has got to be one of your best, and it's so different from your others which makes it better. now i'm gonna be the one to say this zchi:
"take that you ** head alex!"

*CLAPS!*
Masterful! Amazing!
(::Offering cliche praise, because she is rendered speechless::)
I'm sure you know this is how a good lot of us feel. The *Use* of females bodies should be eliminated, and I don't think that my attitude is extreme. Thousands of women in the U.S. alone are raped every year, and so many go unreported, under the radar, because women are too afraid to speak, and people are too afraid to listen. But this is is radical, and full of voices. This gets attention. Amazing.
-K.

wow... that was an AMAZING story, and i liked it...but only the story. i don't know what catagory that fit's under, it's kinda like a diary entry. Did that happen to you? Well, i dont think it did, but if it's true, then you ARE wrong. yes they took advantage of a girl and '**' her, and this girl wants revenge... by KILLING them? would that make her any better than they are? certainly not.
this whole thing has a hysterical, insane tone to it - which is good, i think...