Good work, definately a genre not everyone tackles, but you did it masterfully. I liked how everything rhymed with "name" Good job!

Hm... I somewhat like it, although it could be better. You may wish to work on the flow of the piece. I think your strongest point of the poem is the last couple lines. "You can always kill a life, but beliefs you can never drain." That is such a powerful statement. I love it. Well done.
-Niniane, Lady of the Lake-

the beginin and d end r my favourite part, reli strong poem well done.
XXNerfxx

Powerful and I adore the message behind it. It's brought out well.
Izzy J.

Wow...I don't know what to say, so... dunno! I couldn't really say I liked it... I liked the words, not the facts
See you
LastUnicorn4life

aw very sad goiod job tho.. powerful and cool rhymes

it's really good ( :