*jaw drops*

THAT WAS GOD like a cupcake in January!

Wow...that's all i can really say...wow... Thanks for the awesome story!

Wow...this was very well written. *Purrs* Wolves are insane... Anyways, I loved the decriptions and how the story flowed. *Sniffles* poor Silver. All in all this was a great story. Keep on writing. ^_^

O.o -> whoa.

I luff this story... makes me cry! T_T Beautiful work, Blue-chan, I luff it! *wipes tear*

Only one nitpicky thing: you said when the person's banging their hands on the cave floor you said something like "blood mixed with the one on the floor"...that sounds kind of awkward. Maybe use "mixed with that on the floor." In context it should be better...

P.S. I updated The Dragon's Embrace... please R&R!

Hey pretty good short story, no wait its better then pretty good lol. but yea im not used to reading stuff like this but its really good. im goin to read alot more of your works, and I really like your writing style.

Hello! Just returning your review on the Dragon's Embrace. Glad you liked it. (Sorry about the phreaky spacing issues, I've tried using hyphens and stuff but it doesn't work, I'm trying to upload the next chappur so periodically check back and review if you read, thx!)

This is a well-written story, very descriptive, good transitions! Well done! I especially like the ending... the puppy is so sweet! It was a good twist!

It's cool you play RPGs... ever played Baldur's Gate *Dark Alliance, Dark Alliance 2* or Neverwinter Nights? :)

*~InSilverShadows~*

Hey sounds like my story, THE WOMAN WHO IS WOLF, he he, I love wolves, seems like you do too! Love the story even though you had to kill Silver! Gr... lol oh well

Ya just had to kill Silver off, didn't you. *sobs* It's been tragedy stories for awhile. This was short, but I liked it none the less. ^^ Very cute story, dispite the said ending. And now the boy is living with the indians. That's a good thing, right? Evil men and their dogs. *Growls*
Awsome!
_Belle

I can't you killed off that nice Silver!! It's so..(sob)..sad!
But anyway, it was good. I think you've got a great way with writing short stories. Keep on writing!!
I'll be waiting for that romance story. Sounds good...

I feel silly if I didn't review. I realy like this story, so tragic, so full of emotions.
If only you would stop writing sad stories and sad music! ^_^
It's beautiful. Keep up the good work~!

'ello! Cool story, very touching, poor Silver! *sobs* Still, this is a great tale.

WAH! this is AMAZING, Blue! ahh! beautifully written! oh, how i wish i had a puppy to schnuggle with. i like how you wrote it in 1st person, and the wolf thing is really awesome. tee-hee, i've got a thing for wolves ^_^. anyway, if i wasn't so tired *yawns* i'd give you the nice, long review you so utterly deserve, but alas! it's 1 AM here and i'm about to fall asleep on my keyboard. *yawns again* hmm...and i STILL haven't read Shadowclaw. grr, i really need to prioritize. anyway, WONDERFUL STORY! you do write lovely short stories.
Until our next meeting,
~Beaver

*sniff* Touching... very touching...
A great short story Blue - better than my 200 worders at least. I love the first person description you use - it's very vivid.
Well done, good luck with the writer's block and I hope the next short story is as good.
-Jake Delfeir - Lord of the Eternal Skies-
"Arise, noble creatures of the sky... your time has come again!"

cool! i like Silver! maybe thats just cuz i like wolves... heh... i think they're awesome! great story!