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Reviews For: The Forgotten Leaf

Yokotaashi
2005-08-24
ch 1,
abuseThis is great use of personification and symbolism, it brings a whole new light to the emotion, great job!
Damaged
2004-02-28
ch 1,
abuseWhoa .. very deep poem with a strong moral between the lines ... I'm in awe of your talent! Keep it up!!
Mallory Beldevere
2004-02-22
ch 1,
abuseHm. This was neat.
I liked the imagery. I like how the leaf can be compared to a person, even though it's not said, it's implied. Well, to me at least.
Great job! :D
Rebecca Kelsey
2004-02-22
ch 1,
abusethis is beautiful, keep writing...
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