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| Yokotaashi 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is great use of personification and symbolism, it brings a whole new light to the emotion, great job! |
| Damaged 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseWhoa .. very deep poem with a strong moral between the lines ... I'm in awe of your talent! Keep it up!! |
| Mallory Beldevere 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuseHm. This was neat. I liked the imagery. I like how the leaf can be compared to a person, even though it's not said, it's implied. Well, to me at least. Great job! :D |
| Rebecca Kelsey 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abusethis is beautiful, keep writing... |