|Reviews for Vaelis|
| Quid 8/3/04 . chapter 17
Wow, really good story. It had some spelling errors and some parts didn't sound quite right, but all in all very impressing!
| Kaitlyn Chelsea 7/6/04 . chapter 2
wow, this is a really good story. i haven't even read everything that you posted and i'm already hooked. can't wait to read the rest, keep up the good work.
| Mychael Lynne 3/12/04 . chapter 17
that's a really good story. me like :)
| Mychael Lynne 3/6/04 . chapter 14
great story! keep it up!
| Me 3/1/04 . chapter 3
This is a very well written story, and I realize that there are more chapters than what I have read so far, but it really shouldn't be a PG rating. Considering the murder, some people might not think it's an appropriate you raise the rating, you should also put WHY. Other than that, though, I really like this story. It has AMAZING potential.
| K.A. Rosa 2/26/04 . chapter 5
Wow! Awesome story! Can't wait for the next installment!
| AryaWinds 2/24/04 . chapter 3
I'm confused, but this is a good story, and it's very interesting so far. A bit sad, but interesting enough. Update!