Wow, really good story. It had some spelling errors and some parts didn't sound quite right, but all in all very impressing!

wow, this is a really good story. i haven't even read everything that you posted and i'm already hooked. can't wait to read the rest, keep up the good work.

that's a really good story. me like :)

great story! keep it up!

This is a very well written story, and I realize that there are more chapters than what I have read so far, but it really shouldn't be a PG rating. Considering the murder, some people might not think it's an appropriate you raise the rating, you should also put WHY. Other than that, though, I really like this story. It has AMAZING potential.

Wow! Awesome story! Can't wait for the next installment!

I'm confused, but this is a good story, and it's very interesting so far. A bit sad, but interesting enough. Update!