Reviews for A Moment of Clarity

poet tree 2005-05-21 ch 1,	abuseI love the last few paragraphs...the story seems confusing, but it all ties together at the end. Lovely.
m maldonado 2004-02-28 ch 1,	abuseThat was nifty. It was a story that lent itself to speedy reading--its pace was extremely fast and very gripping. Nice how you kept dropping hints, and then bombed the reader with the reveal. Very good. m
kurai-kitsune 2004-02-22 ch 1,	abusewow. wow wow wow. okay, at first I was really confused, and had to read through it three times, but after that when I finally got it, (I'm perceptive, I know)that's all I could say. It reminds me of this show where this lady's daughter got killed, and she escaped from the mental institution, and thinks all the little girls are her daughter... sad how that happens to people, huh. One thing that's really unique about this is the way you dictated it. Lots of verbs. Not much space wasted on descrip, or anything flowery like that, pure action. You also write this like something like this has happened to you or someone you know, cuz it's really... I don't even know how to put it (at a loss for words, that's not me!) But I'm stunned. okay, enough of me ranting... AWESOME JOB! much luv, Blackfire