that was totally awesome! People today focus too much on telling people they're not perfect when they're young, and when they're older telling them that they are, which makes it worse.

that's sad... I like it. You have a way with words.

Excellent... Usually I skip long poems but this was very nicely done...

Great concept...Very unique...I would have never thought of that.

Now, looking back at it, I realize it's very good but you're making it sound like it's the world to someone if they actually believe that they're appearance is beautiful when it's actually the thoughts and emotions that should be beautiful, ne?

hmm very true... i liek it alot.. great descriptions

Nice... You have a good point... People are taught to underestimate themselves... Pointless idea...

wow... i really liked that. good work. great rhythm.