Reviews for Breathe in, Breathe out

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kirsten was 2006-04-25 ch 1,	abusethat was so adorable! i loved it
Verdi 2005-12-27 ch 1,	abuseexcellent descriptions, very vivid
Yep it's just me 2005-11-25 ch 1,	abuseVery nice!
Renzie 2005-09-19 ch 1,	abuseI loved this one :D Amazing one-shot! There's not much more I can say, but wow! Great job < 3
Nikkole15 2005-09-19 ch 1,	abuseLove it! Claps Bravo!! Yay! Keep up the good work! Cna't wait for the next chapter! UPDATE SOON! ~Nikkole~
Black Feather Quill 2005-08-05 ch 1,	abuseOh, my god...I am like crying...That was so good! -"What's a good story without a good review? Reviews Captain Smallie's Crew's stories!" hehe
Tortugapoet 2005-07-08 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is a beautiful story. I wish you would write more! But it's been a year and more since you posted this. I want to know more about the setting and have character development! I love it. Write more? Please? Hee. -Drea
Jameela 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseholy crap,This fic is an absolute beauty.
BelfiCat 2005-03-22 ch 1,	abuseI really like this story. The beginning especailly, the description is beautiful, you have a real way with words. Update please!
umbrius 2005-03-17 ch 1,	abuseJOE: Sorry we haven't reviewed in so long. KYR: Yes, we apologize. JOE: NEway, this is interesting, a segment of a love story... KYR: ...that we think you should add to. It is very well written. JOE: Oh yeah, and thanks for the review, I wish I had more time to write...and a little more interest. At the moment, I have to work on programming and getting ready to move. KYR: Yes, we finally get to move into our own place. BOTH: AND WE GET OUR OWN COMPUTER SOON TOO! Bye, we'll try to review some more soon...
darqlyte 2005-01-22 ch 1,	abuseThis was one of my early stories I read and one my of favortie short stories. I like it alot, it's very romantic without being explicit. You did a great job on it. If you like poetry you can check out some of my other stuff, if you want. Again, great story, I really like it, you should publish it, if possible. God Bless. -Blaeyk Q'ohle Darqlyte
Lil Bazza 2004-11-03 ch 1,	abuseAre you going to continue? Cause I really want you to, but you don't have to. I like the story, and the setting (though you don't know much about where they are in relation to the world and stuff) and I can't wait to see it continue.
sweet hunny 2004-07-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseaw..the ending is so sweet. i love this story. bittersweet endings always get me.:)
Twizzlers 2004-07-09 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was excellent! I really enjoyed reading that. I really liked the setting and how it wasn't made clear, but you could get an exact picture of what everything looked like anyways. You're an awesome writer and I really think you could go somewhere with it. I've read novels that weren't this good. : ) I'm gonna go see if you have anything else I can read now. Keep writing stories as good as this one! >>Twizz
ashL. 2004-04-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseomg thats a great story...u are a really great writter and should keep on writtin...good luck! - ashley

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