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kirsten was 2006-04-25 . chapter 1
that was so adorable! i loved it
Verdi 2005-12-27 . chapter 1
excellent descriptions, very vivid
Yep it's just me 2005-11-25 . chapter 1
Very nice!
Renzie 2005-09-19 . chapter 1
I loved this one :D Amazing one-shot! There's not much more I can say, but wow! Great job < 3
Nikkole15 2005-09-19 . chapter 1
Love it! *Claps* Bravo!! Yay! Keep up the good work! Cna't wait for the next chapter!

UPDATE SOON!

~Nikkole~
Black Feather Quill 2005-08-05 . chapter 1
Oh, my god...I am like crying...That was so good!

-"What's a good story without a good review? Reviews Captain Smallie's Crew's stories!"

hehe
Tortugapoet 2005-07-08 . chapter 1
Wow, this is a beautiful story. I wish you would write more! But it's been a year and more since you posted this. I want to know more about the setting and have character development! I love it. Write more? Please? Hee. -Drea
Jameela 2005-04-16 . chapter 1
holy crap,This fic is an absolute beauty.
BelfiCat 2005-03-22 . chapter 1
I really like this story. The beginning especailly, the description is beautiful, you have a real way with words. Update please!
umbrius 2005-03-17 . chapter 1
JOE: Sorry we haven't reviewed in so long.

KYR: Yes, we apologize.

JOE: NEway, this is interesting, a segment of a love story...

KYR: ...that we think you should add to. It is very well written.

JOE: Oh yeah, and thanks for the review, I wish I had more time to write...and a little more interest. At the moment, I have to work on programming and getting ready to move.

KYR: Yes, we finally get to move into our own place.

BOTH: AND WE GET OUR OWN COMPUTER SOON TOO! Bye, we'll try to review some more soon...
darqlyte 2005-01-22 . chapter 1
This was one of my early stories I read and one my of favortie short stories.

I like it alot, it's very romantic without being explicit.

You did a great job on it.

If you like poetry you can check out some of my other stuff, if you want.

Again, great story, I really like it, you should publish it, if possible.

God Bless.

-Blaeyk Q'ohle Darqlyte
Lil Bazza 2004-11-03 . chapter 1
Are you going to continue? Cause I really want you to, but you don't have to. I like the story, and the setting (though you don't know much about where they are in relation to the world and stuff) and I can't wait to see it continue.
sweet hunny 2004-07-28 . chapter 1
aw..the ending is so sweet. i love this story. bittersweet endings always get me.:)
Twizzlers 2004-07-09 . chapter 1
Wow, that was excellent! I really enjoyed reading that. I really liked the setting and how it wasn't made clear, but you could get an exact picture of what everything looked like anyways. You're an awesome writer and I really think you could go somewhere with it. I've read novels that weren't this good. : ) I'm gonna go see if you have anything else I can read now. Keep writing stories as good as this one! >>Twizz
ashL. 2004-04-09 . chapter 1
omg thats a great story...u are a really great writter and should keep on writtin...good luck! - ashley
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