I really did like it Obie, not that I thought I wouldn't. You really are good at this. *smiles* I am proud of you. Even at this early age here, you have harnesed your talent. Keep it up, good things are sure to come. I would like to see more shor stories, something to do maybe in between chapters of your book.

Wow, that was so awesome! Can't wait to read more of your works.

I'm too lazy to login. Anyways, wonderful story! I loved it. You're much better at short stories than I am, which is cool because I'll never finish a story O_o...anyways, I did like it. Good job!