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| Reviews for Remedy |
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   Charlottes-pen 10/18/04 . chapter 16Hey, sorry for taking so long to review, I thought I had, but I guess not. I like the story, the plot moves a bit fast, but your way of telling a story and the words are just beautiful. I especially loved the way you told about the sunset in Bluntly Bittersweet. It was just so beautiful. Keep it up |
| Romina 10/8/04 . chapter 1 hey i really like the prolgue totally true your a great arthour and i hope to see one of your books on the shelf one day. |
| Romina 10/8/04 . chapter 1 hey i really like the prolgue totally true your a great arthour and i hope to see one of your books on the shelf one day. |
| Romina 10/8/04 . chapter 1 hey i really like the prolgue totally true your a great arthour and i hope to see one of your books on the shelf one day. |
| Romina 10/8/04 . chapter 1 hey i really like the prolgue totally true your a great arthour and i hope to see one of your books on the shelf one day. |
| escapevelocityo2 9/2/04 . chapter 14 I'm in love with your writing. Its so genuine and unique. Excellent word choice and imagery, It almost made me cry ... Keep writing, Im your biggest fan! Lana |
| SanitysOverrated87 8/30/04 . chapter 4 I dont have time to read past this tonight but what i have read so far i like. It keeps you wanting to continue. I will definately be coming back to finish it. The last line of this chapter is absolutely great. It really shows her pain with out using cliches. I love it! |
| David Paine 6/17/04 . chapter 4 Interesting story. Might want to work on longer chapters and brush up on some grammar - other than that, fantastic. |
| lana 4/26/04 . chapter 14 oh so you wanna write half a story like that but not half a story with me? you know the whole natalie/ dakota thing! Leave it to you to turn me down. ps. im not angry just weird how u said it so plz explain ... |
| freedman121 4/14/04 . chapter 14 Huh.. I wonder who that is! Great chapter anyhoo. Freedman |
| Liz 4/13/04 . chapter 14 Oh mi god what? UGH! leave us in suspense like that dude, update now! right now ! you cant make ur chapters 2 pages and then update every 2 weeks , that's just mean! um.. Im guessing its Aden in there doing ... He really needs to get a life, like get out of the little BAA circle and get himself some normal girl..who is at least legal? ya, update soon! |
| rustupidorjustnotbright 4/12/04 . chapter 14 you realy need to make your chapters longer, so readers can find out what happens. anyways I like it. |
| Romina 4/10/04 . chapter 13 OMG this is one book that has to get pulished. It totally describes reality and the morals of life. |
| deletemyaccount2012 4/4/04 . chapter 13 I'm hooked on this story. It's fantastic. |
| Someone Named Eumi 4/4/04 . chapter 1 You, miss, have talent. Captivating writing style. Keep writing. I'm already a fan. |
