Excellent. More soon, please.

Bravo! You are developing this story wonderfully! I just adore the tension between Ran and Aridan. :-)

This was fabulous! I was laughing so hard ... Kudos.

This is an excellent beginning. Very interesting plot so far. I'm dyng to know all about this new world and the people you've developed. Kudos.

OMG CUTE! please update soon! I love it and I think you will go far and sorry for such a crappy review but G2G bye

I just love it when the bishounen are confused. *laughs* I hope that something more happens between Ran and Aridan. As for the marriage compromise, it reminds me a little of what the Romans were apt to do. (Sort of.) Continue, please! -meijing-

You really should continue ASAP, Manila K.—I'm curious! Can't wait to see what happens! ^_^ meijing