|Reviews for now or never|
| JJR Meerraf 2/23/04 . chapter 1
That was creepy, she killed herself? *shakes as chills run down my back* Good work, you portrayed her fear very well. One mistake, I think:
"She brang it towards her neck"
Unless your think something else I'm pretty positive that should be "brought".
Great job! You should think about doing a long horror story, you express the horror really well.