Really forceful and interesting imagery. It reminds me a little of my friend Ryan Bailey's work. It sounds really good. My favorite line would have to be "Cut from the cloth of sinners." Very insightful and imaginative. Thank you for your reviews... ^_^* I almost want to think that they're too good to be true. I don't get that many reviews that enthusiatic, so it's always fun when I do. I am very, very glad you enjoy my work. You might like "Evening Ponderings" or "Darkness Feeds It" or "Hope." In any case, again thank you for dropping by and I'll try to review more of your work soon.

wow, you really portray fear in this. Fear of yourself I suposse, unfortunately no one can ever escape themselves. Another great poem!

Wow. This is powerful. I can relate. Your graphic descriptions and images are very intense, I like that. Perhaps my favourite passage is
“I’m anaemic and frail blood flows through my veins
Cut from the cloth of sinners
Cut
Walking, balancing on a razor’s edge”
with that ingenious ambiguity or rather twist of meaning in the word “cut” (Yeah, you know …)
And yes, our stuff is rather similar. That’s why your “Marked and Scarred” was one of the first poems I ever reviewed, and you’re one of the first people I put on my fave authors list. ;-) Hey, do me the favour and have a look at my “No Tear Unheeded”, even if you read nothing else of my stuff. Not because I’m eager for one more review, but it might really have something to tell you. ;-)

this poem is wonderful.. great flow of words good job!

whoa! you're right.. they are similar.. this one and my Fallen Angel. kool!! great poem, love the imagery and word choice!! powerful. :)
~KS

hey i really like it ... keep it up and dont let life get you down to much
totowizofoz

One might think that with all of the poems of angst and misery, with similar words, that any poems added now, to the great pile would be lost, but you seem to have retained an individuality of your work and a talent.

Interesting...though a bit confusing, it had some great images.
Of anything but antisocial angels
The glow gone from their halos
I liked that. Keep writing! It's cool!
And, uh P.S, would you mind reviewing my other story, Black Cradle, the vampire one? I know it's kind of long, but if you get some free time I'd much appreciate it. Thanks!

This is deliciously frightening and 'cutting'. Sorry I can't write more, in class, sigh... I LOVE IT!

i like the circularity. very nice. i think i can relate.

very good. i like this alot, the flow is wonderful. keep up the good work. :)