So well written and so deeply filled with a of these great comparisions. This piece of work flowed very well for how you had it rhyme. I love the last line "Unwelcome feelings remain so well hidden" Wow, powerful and yet also leave a sense of questions. Nice Work.

I love this as well, again I can relate. You express the impossibility of that love really well in those "un-"-adjectives you create. "Unkissable lips" *sigh* I suppose it's about same-sex attraction again, isn't it?

wow i like that alot alot alot its verty tuching stuff you can realate to

Wow. WOW. That is a really great poem. I love how the first line of each stanza is similar.

AWESOME POEM! Man what's up with all these people that write so much more better than me! GR... Once again, awesome...