|Reviews for Forbidden Love|
| under estimated artistsoul 2/21/05 . chapter 1
So well written and so deeply filled with a of these great comparisions. This piece of work flowed very well for how you had it rhyme. I love the last line "Unwelcome feelings remain so well hidden" Wow, powerful and yet also leave a sense of questions. Nice Work.
| Galadh Niniel 2/10/05 . chapter 1
I love this as well, again I can relate. You express the impossibility of that love really well in those "un-"-adjectives you create. "Unkissable lips" *sigh* I suppose it's about same-sex attraction again, isn't it?
| AroseFORtheDEAD 6/12/04 . chapter 1
wow i like that alot alot alot its verty tuching stuff you can realate to
| Sworn Destiny 5/2/04 . chapter 1
Wow. WOW. That is a really great poem. I love how the first line of each stanza is similar.
| Hippos CAN Fly 2/23/04 . chapter 1
AWESOME POEM! Man what's up with all these people that write so much more better than me! GR... Once again, awesome...