*Snif* its so great to know that there are still people in this world who really care about their friends. Its so upsetting when you see your friend is feeling really down about something and you don't know what to do. Question: Life is hard for Bethy's smile... waht about the rest of Bethy? Anyway great poem I really like the way you express yourself.

I'm not sure what to think of this. It's emotional but i guess i'm kinda slow cause i can't figure out whats wrong with Bethy. Care yo fill me in?

You are far too soft-hearted. Excuse me, I have to go slit my wrists because my life isn't worth **.

Hey, I really like this one, one small erroe I think in the fourth line, did you mean to say seens or seems? It sounds very much like you wrote this poem about me, did you? I like this poem though if you did write it about me this shows how far you can see inot me and how I feel.
Love,
Elizabeth

hey, thanks 4 reviewing my stuff! :)
this is good, very sad 2!
i've read a couple of ur others and i like ur style, its really distinctive 4 u, and well written!
u've spelt seen instead of seem i think on the 4th line, but thts just in case u want 2 change it:) everything else seems great 2 me, and i doubt mispelling has ever ruined a poem, not a good 1 anyway, fingers crossed:)
feel free 2 check out more of my stuff if u'd like, i love reviews and i'll make sure 2 read more of ur stuff, i do really like ur style, its written slightly more maturly than sum poems, which just means bigger words probably:)
anyway great poems, congrats!