Wow. The simplest vocabulary carries on such a powerful message.

Very insighful poem...I love the way taht you put the words poer and tast together...it works really well to capture that hunger for power.

Sweet, normally I would say "use more imagery" but in these cases I like the message part of it more. Spectacular way of getting the point across.

Franken

True... very true. Everyone DOES have this craving for power. It's just too bad that the ones who get it either become corrupted by it or are corrupted already. Good job. _