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| Manuel Fajar 2004-11-28 ch 1,   | Pretty, though gruesome! m |
| Faerunner 2004-04-25 ch 1, | Oh my... that's beautiful! The lines "como hadas/ muertas" to describe the flowers were great. I'm sorry I didn't read it sooner. Keep up the awesome work! |
| moonvine 2004-04-05 ch 1, | Hey, not bad! Do you know Spanish? I know only a few since our language has a bit of Spanish and I also have a Spanish blood. I understood your poem. |
| twilightwriter07 2004-03-07 ch 1, | Wow...I liked the strong imagery here...especially like"flores rojas como hadas muertas..." and the ending your of poem. Nice job all around. ^_~ |
| lili brik 2004-03-03 ch 1, | mm, like the combination of languages...sangre sounds so much prettier than blood but maybe that's just me. quite nice |
| frugale 2004-02-29 ch 1, | Thank you very much for the formatted version! It is much more enjoyable that way. Your poem is lovely. Delicious imagery. |
| karmakaze 2004-02-25 ch 1, | Oh...I like how you combined the Spanish and English in this...although I don't know a TON of Spanish... I just know a tiny bit from elementary school... So, this is pretty cool:) |
| Ushi 2004-02-24 ch 1, | Oh, double imagery! The girl in the rain... and the dying red flower. ¡Exelente! Had to look up paraguas... it means umbrella. I'm stupid. The bit with the blood and the acid rain... *ow*. I caught myself rubbing my wrist. Good job! |