 John Adam Clark 2008-05-16 . chapter 1 Iam a man who is looking for love.
A man who is 16 and likes to take care of the his self and the other person.
Iam a kind man who will be there when needed or when that person is down.
So if there is someone I can find talk to me. |
 Beau Coeur 2004-07-20 . chapter 1I saw that Eliot85 recommended you and your writing, so I knew you had to be good. And yes, once more, he was correct, as he seems often to be. This poem was good, it had a nice rhythm to it, one that somehow seemed unique to me. I could relate to it as well, as I'm sure many could. And by the way, I agree, poetry shouldn't need summaries...
~Beau Coeur |
 chrestomanci 2004-07-16 . chapter 1An interesting style choice. Approximate rhymes are nicely selected, and it's good to see you write something a little lighter. Well done! |
 Savagetitania 2004-03-23 . chapter 1*dies* I love it! Of course, I may be biased...as I love you. |
 evm 2004-02-26 . chapter 1Spiffy! Sappy love poems are fun! Titles a bit long though, (hope you don't mind the constructive criticism(sp?)) the shorter the title, the more attention it gets...does fit though...so I guess, I'm just being random and it's fine the way it is..score with this poem! It's good! |
 ClassicElfRyoko 2004-02-26 . chapter 1wow,..I don't really know if there is such a thing anymore. Atleast..for me I haven't found it. I stopped looking for that when I met this racsit guy that I like..but that's well that was a whole different story. Anyways, I liked your poem and the feeling to it.and I hope that special someone was for you. :) |