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| Image of the Invisible 2004-02-27 ch 1, | damn betch! this is SUCH a great story...hmm...if i wrote this, i wouldn't be JUST more than honored. i'd die just to say yes...Ü |
| MistrissD 2004-02-24 ch 1, | Its an interesting begining, i like how its portrayed in a real life senario type, the quote is gorgeous as well. However you could expand this a bit, and maybe explain the issues between bella and xandra? Either way it was rather nice to read |