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Reviews For: Red Light Pledge

Image of the Invisible
2004-02-27
ch 1,
damn betch! this is SUCH a great story...hmm...if i wrote this, i wouldn't be JUST more than honored. i'd die just to say yes...Ü
MistrissD
2004-02-24
ch 1,
Its an interesting begining, i like how its portrayed in a real life senario type, the quote is gorgeous as well. However you could expand this a bit, and maybe explain the issues between bella and xandra? Either way it was rather nice to read
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