uwa.. that can't be..! >.<
they feel the same way..
you should make a sequel to this one..!

Very well written.
What happens next?
PG

aww
very sweet
i loved it to pieces!
well done
xD

This was a really nice story. I love your writing! This is to be added to my fave stories!

excellent story! youve got such a fantastic style and the way you potrayed both characters ... you are wonderful. hope therell be more!

Heehee. Don't we all wish, right? But I think you'd feel terrible if it happened in real life--sometimes fantasy is better than the reality, you don't ahve to deal with the back lash. Aside from that, I can really see through this one just how much you've grown as a writer--your narrative voice is easily recognizable--mostly because I've read so much of your stuff in second period, but anyway... ^_^

nice spin-off on the typikal plot line love your style it's fresh. great job fact that's it's partly personal makes it even better
~k8

Oh my God! You cant end it like that! That's a horrible thing to do! Gr. Please write more! I beg of you!