I love this poem. However, I must make a comment on the title. From the looks of it, it's in French (please correct me if I am wrong) Mon is masculine and Ame looks to be feminine. Your title is not correct in French. Ma Amie Immortelle- feminine. Mon Ami Immortel- masculine. I know you may see this as nitpicking or being rude, I do apologize. I just believe you should have the correct french title for your poem.

It's a really, really wonderful poem.
Bravo!
Nicole