hm...very intriguing! Please update!

Aww; I get interested and then there's no update. This is a very cute and fascinating story beginning. From beginning to now, it always makes you want to know what's going to happen next. The schitzophrenia was an interesting twist, though I have my suspicion that it may not be that at all (but I'm just a reader, so I only suppose). If you ever get to updating this story again, I'll be a happy reader. I look forward to potentially learning more about Mordrin.

so far, i really love your writing style and your characters. the story certainly has me hooked. :)

This seems really interesting. You put a lot of detail into the story, and you've done a great job with it. Update soon!

Please update as soon as you can!! I can't wait to read more!

Ohh who's Antonio? He seems cool :) Im really glad you picked this story up again cuase it seems to have alot of promise
*~* Dy *~*

Schizophrenic, eh? Well, as Cynthia has already reached the conclusion, she will never have a dull moment. Antonio... hm... don't like him already. The sexy ones are always the ones I'm naturally distrustful of. Well, great chap! Update soon!
Happy Hunting,
MOONLITDEMON

Neato...I am all curious about mordrin and stuff, and i assume the man with the cane is going to answer some questions in the next chapter, i cant wait!

Hey, sorry I haven't been reading Cry.S. but I've been busy...This chappy was good, I always liked the first two, you have to write more! I demand it! lol...

*does a couple back flips of joy*

i like your story. keeping updating.

Cool, I am glad you posted in this story again. I was just wondering about it yesterday. I really like it and I enjoyed this chapter. I am interested in finding out who or what Mordrin is. He is so mysterious that it erks me and I have to know about him.

Dis ish god...you should keep writing this one.

Cool start to a story. I like it a lot and I can't wait for more. It sounds really interesting. :)

Hey :) I just read your fic and I love what you've written so far. It's definitly got me waiting for more. I love your use of language, it's both funny and still allows the the story to retain it's mystery.
Update soon? Pretty please?
Note to self: Don't review fics after writing an Englsih assignment.
Can't wait to read more!
Yodes