Oh, wow. This is absolutely beautiful. :) It reminds me of how I feel about my boyfriend. Amazing work!! :D

Angelic and captivating!

I know you don't need revies the way I do, but since you reviewed (sort of) one of mine I thought I'd review your poetry, although I'm too lazy to read any of your fiction right now. As for this lovely poem, the imagery is so vivid it makes me shiver.

This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. The rhythm of the poem is amazing, it just rolls off the tongue, and the imagery is awesome. I love it.

A piece of art.

M...it's alright. The words and desciptions are lovely in their own right, but the theme is very generic. :/

i love 'eyes enflame to show ur soul' WELL DONE! u can b funny and sweet! love ya lots! Gretchen45 x

Very good, okay pattern, could have all of the ends of poems rhym, don't worry, only a suggestion. Think you can read my Of Horn and Ivory, need reviews. good form in the 2nd to last, you have the big three words in last part, three always makes a big impact. Very good.

you can write... I love it!

You said that you normally don't write poetry, but from this poem I would have never guessed that. It is beautiful and I love how you came across so angelically. This poem really touches another part of me it's lovely

JOE: Sad, yet good.
KYR: Blah, blah, blah...

Flipping awesome. I love how it says so much while saying so little. ^_^() I tend to say a lot by saying A LOT. All in all, I really enjoyed this poem. Were it me, I'd lengthen it (naturally) and throw in absurds amounts or metaphors, imagery, similes, etc. But that's just my writing style, yours works just fine. Well done!

Thats cute, it it about a wedding? or is it just like a friend-that-you-haven't-seen-for-ages kind of thing? Maybe something else? luv Sparrow xx