   Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 11Simple, yet nice. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 10 I like this image, very soothing. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 9 Candy is good though... |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 8 Hee, hee. Yes, I'll bet. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 7 Quite nice. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 6 Very cute! I love kittens! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 5 Provokes thought.
P.S. Thus far, you paint pleasing images to the sky but they are all works done before; they are topics that have been described before. Sometimes you must simply write anything random that pops into your head, and put it down on paper. That will be something no one has heard of. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 4 I like the simile. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 3 Sweet. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 2 I like "the moon is golden" |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-25 . chapter 1 Quite nice. |
 Shadow Wolf 2004-06-15 . chapter 4 I like this one also.It was very good.The night is best when stars are out.
Shadow Wolf |
| Shadow Wolf 2004-06-15 . chapter 2 That was a really good Haiku.The night is my favorite time of day.Especially when there is a full moon.
Shadow Wolf |
 Lounalune 2004-03-17 . chapter 9I hate V-day too...especially when I'm alone, which happens to be every V-day...but I'm not here to complain about my love life. Good haiku, although I prefered the other ones I reviewed. |
| Lounalune 2004-03-17 . chapter 7 Wow! |
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