This has some really impressive imagery. The wording is incredibly insanely wow too. I'm half asleep right now, so please excuse me if words are failing my poor, tired mind. I didn't really get the meaning, but the beauty of the poem comes through stronger, since it almost seems the tie between the verses. This is really nice work, and I'm sure I'll understand it on the second reading, but my brain isn't working too well now. Keep it up, this is really impressive :)

Sorry for not reviewing, my computer was having issues! Briallent imagrey...I totally envy your talent. You always paint the picture so well.
Keep writing.
-Seras

This is so lovely! I am reading this in an english lesson and everyone is going crazy, so pecful, i love how you used only used lines ,it gave themnost amazing impresion. Comepeltly transported me somewhere else, a tad too long, but i liked that.

This is stunning.
Your descriptions are very powerful, and they bring vivid images to my head. This was a fabulous poem.

A beautiful poem expressed with vivid imagery. Poems like these are always enjoyable to read, as they draw you to the wonderful worlds found in our imaginations. Thanks for sharing :)
*cosmo-queen*

I love the depth os this piece. Your descriptions are vivid and wondefrul. Simply beautiful...
c. butterfly~**