Applause! Wow chica this so rocks! And it's only your first song! well I'm definitely waiting for more! At first I thought it was going to be one of those mediocre britney spears kinda things *cringe* but this is definitely amazing and truly stunning and magnificent, lol! Fantabulous chica you must write more! Love. Mia

mm reminds me of poe. the singer not the poet but her songs are more poetry art than song. i love poe and this poem song should be called a pong or a soem whichever you like better (i prefer pong) anyway awesome awesome and i like the child reference and somehow it connects to the woman as if the woman is the child and the child is the woman or at least thats my interpretation. your work just keeps on getting better and better. amazing

WOW! love it love it love it!
Arashi

Quite the beautiful expression of growth in a young girl's life. For this being you first song, it is very good. I look forward to your great written works.

Nice...good job...I can definitely see that being a song.