good job! complete 100% truth! go you, you person you! lol. good job, high five, YAY!
*Paine

I really like this poem. It is really true about society. The rhythm to it is very nice. The idea about the bomb hits home too. Great job, and keep up the good work!

O.O WOW! OMFG! THIS IS TO AWESOME FOR WORDS! faves, totally going on faves. this is so...argh! i can't believe you wrote this! and everything in it is completely true! *raises hand* i admit, im guilty of spending not enough time with people and too much on the computer and stuff. its like man's curse of evolution and technology, that eventually it'll all jsut come crashing down, and either we'll burn one by one, or we have to do something and try to preserve what's left of it and cherish it while we can. sorry, im not making much sense. im jsut stunned. god, faves faves. _ this ROCKS MY WORLD!

Good work. _

muy bueno!